it was a lame attempt at writing a haiku... and die hard traditional haiku fans will gladly burn me at the stake for willfully ignoring the rules of writing a haiku. oh what the hell... i mean it anyway. but i'm so glad to have found it again.
and hence, i'm posting this for posterity:
12-14052006
vascillating mind
wrist watch beckons
time at standstill
journey between hills
the eyes closed
when will it be over
same receptionist smiled
her mischievious thoughts
key card to room 914
cold beer in alexis
and the sky poured
smoking and waiting
came thru the door
the smile again
enveloped in an embrace
rivers gushing wild
oceans forming wide
who's to stop them?
between the bedsheet
and the pillows
his murmurs seeped into the night
hazy petrol filled day
never beyond the hills
it shall remain here
to depart day after
the face must be brave
for the night
the night dies out
the key to morning
must be lost but it did not
silence marked
the departure
a kiss and embrace dominates
back home
the spot next to me
you're back there again
vascillating mind
wrist watch beckons
time at standstill
journey between hills
the eyes closed
when will it be over
same receptionist smiled
her mischievious thoughts
key card to room 914
cold beer in alexis
and the sky poured
smoking and waiting
came thru the door
the smile again
enveloped in an embrace
rivers gushing wild
oceans forming wide
who's to stop them?
between the bedsheet
and the pillows
his murmurs seeped into the night
hazy petrol filled day
never beyond the hills
it shall remain here
to depart day after
the face must be brave
for the night
the night dies out
the key to morning
must be lost but it did not
silence marked
the departure
a kiss and embrace dominates
back home
the spot next to me
you're back there again
2 comments:
Kinda sounds like a secret tete-a-tete with a prostitute, bro :)
~Sengz
aye handsome! no lah, nothing of that sort one lah, i got morals you know. that was more of the one who was never meant to be.
drinks in the village soon! buzz you sometime soon.
cheerio!
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